View Full Version : Manchine Webcomic
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10-09-2009, 04:23 PM
Check it out my webcomic using Champion Online. WOOOT!
http://www.globaldefenseforce.com/files/Manchine_II.pdf
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10-09-2009, 04:42 PM
I just noticed a few grammer errors. They will be fixed tomarrow.
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10-09-2009, 05:26 PM
They will be fixed tomarrow.
I think... Uh. I think uh...
Oh.
I see what you did there.
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10-09-2009, 06:37 PM
I think... Uh. I think uh...
Oh.
I see what you did there.
I sorta got to excited and posted it before doing that. (I have to go to my work computer to fix it since the programs I use don't work in VISTA. Surprise surprise.)
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10-10-2009, 12:18 PM
Better be careful Machine, Night Lord is always watching you.
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10-10-2009, 12:27 PM
Better be careful Machine, Night Lord is always watching you.
LOL.
Yes, I wonder who he looks like. Hmmm, in there group there is Magnus Star, Night Lord, Amazon, Golden Gauntlet, Blur, Harelquin The Laughing God and Beast of the Deep. They bring there own type of Justice to the world. =) :D
I still have to upload the new one. I will do that later tonight after the hockey game. =)
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10-10-2009, 10:32 PM
I like it. Good work!
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10-11-2009, 07:57 AM
Shouldn't have any spelling errors now. =)
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10-12-2009, 02:54 AM
Not at all bad Manchine, I look forward to seeing the progression of this story over more issues.
Nice use of the ruined house as part of the story, by the way. My only criticism would be that the "fight" was over far to quickly after all the exposition, but maybe this was intentional to show how out-matched Golden Gauntlet was.
Much prefer the Champions version of the costume to the previous incarnation incidentally. :D
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10-12-2009, 04:51 AM
I would of loved to of shown a few more shots of the fight scene but its hard to get the shots for a single person. Its not like City of Heroes. Its a lot harder to get the shots of powers in action as I found out. :D
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10-13-2009, 04:13 AM
I would of loved to of shown a few more shots of the fight scene but its hard to get the shots for a single person. Its not like City of Heroes. Its a lot harder to get the shots of powers in action as I found out. :D
Yes they need to give an option to remove the auto center thing this game likes to do when you attack or whatever..
Gets on my nerves when I try to make a good desktop background.
Man... Villains are always so eager to divulge their plans!
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10-13-2009, 08:17 AM
Yes they need to give an option to remove the auto center thing this game likes to do when you attack or whatever..
Gets on my nerves when I try to make a good desktop background.
Man... Villains are always so eager to divulge their plans!
Luckily I have a wireless mouse but its still quite a juggling act. =)
So what did you think of it?